Story : The starting was quite simple but the suspense was unexpected. Which is definitely the USP of this short movie.
Audio – I wish if you could work a little more on the audio. Decrease the background volume during a conversation. Pre-record voice or use better mic systems.
Video – Camera angles were fine but light was not proper.
Acting – The guy can act. He is good!
Direction – Loved the concept and overall it was a great short movie except few things. The front pockets of the wallet were very small to keep a condom. Also, the guy was loud enough for the girl to understand what he is talking. Such small mistakes should be ignored as they put wrong perception on the audience but these small mistakes can be used to create curiosity and buzz later when you are well known.
Summary – It keeps the audience engaged and leaves an impression. You have done a good job!